Thursday 9 October 2014

Assignment 1 Feedback Learner Response

The Feedback:


  • Planning Docks Fine.
  • Good Image + Title.
  • Need A Main Flash That Link's With Central Image.
  • Need To Get Slogan On There.
  • Cover Lines.
  • `I` Logo.
In the next few lessons I will be working towards adding the main cover lines to make my magazine cover look more professional and to give the audience a better idea of what the magazine cover I will be designing be about. I will also be adding an interview with a 16 year old who is actually been in the military kidets. I will even be adding a slogan to make my cover look more professional and so the audience would want to read more about what is life in the military as a teenager.